Once upon a time, in the afternoon, there was a poor farmer. He live with his wife.One day, he dug field and found a very large box. He then store the in their homes. One sunny morning, she dropped appels were taken out, more apples going on insisde the box. One day, forming dropping gold coins into the box.
Simultaneously, Apple began to dissapear and the box full of gold coins. Farmer soon became rich. After hearing that his son became wealthy, forming a father visiting coupies. His father was not very strong. He could not go out to work again. So the farmer asked his old father tohelp him take the gold coins out of the box. His father worked hard, took the gold coins out of the box. When he was told that he was very tired and wanted to rest, the farmer yelied to him, Why are you so lazy, why can't you work harder old man said nothing and continued to work long suddenly? Man rell into the box, he died.
As well as gold coins began to dissapear and the box is filled with the dead. The former should be pulled out and buried. To do this, farmers have to spend all the money that had been collected earlier. When he had spent his money, broke the box. The farmer was ugly as before, terrible ending.
Is it a whole of your story? If not, why you said that it is terrible ending in your last sentence?
BalasHapusPay attention to your punctuation and your spelling